Sunday, February 12, 2012

Good Writing week 4

"Time passes, but neither of us speaks, as Leo's hand completely covers mine. The weight and warmth of it is the same as it was at the diner, the day all of this began, but the gesture feels completely different. This contact is not incidental to a conversation. It is the conversation. It is also an invitation. An invitation I accept with a languid turn of my wrist until my palm is up, facing his, and we are officially holding hands. I tell myself that it is the most innocent of gestures. Grade-school crushes hold hands. Parents and children hold hands. Friends hold hands. But not like this. Never like this. I listen to the sound of Leo breathing, his face close to mine, as our fingers interlock, unlace, rearrange. And we fly east that way, eventually drifting off, suspended in the sky, in time, together." (Giffin 171).

This passage is from the book "love the one you're with" by Emily Giffin. This is not the only passage from her book that has literally sent chills down my spine while reading it. Written so beautifully, this passage is relatable and explains how the character is feeling exactly.

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